Not Just Any Summer Love *Chapter 10*

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I am getting a lot of comments that just say 'love it!' You guys could do so much better! So to inspire you, I am going to put up my favorite comments on the chapters! My favorite comment(s) from chapter 9: angieluvsjb: omg loved it! "Um...Nick got hot and took off his shirt and um there was a bug on his lips and I killed it?" haha something i would probably say :) smofey91: whoa!! that was awesome!! i like how her aunt was like "kids"!! oh and it got a little cheeky between hailey and nick!! lol! i can't wait for the next one!! lyssa92: hahaha i really like your commentary. "Did I mention they were on top of eachother, on her bed? Oops. My bad...not." this is the best fanfic ever. you should post a new chapter like, every hour! allygator64: Man everyone else's comments are boring and just say "Loved/Love it!" That tells me they thought it was pretty boring!! Well I am commenting more than just that!!!: I love She's The Man!! The mini-golf was so cheesy but Cute! "Did I mention they were on top of eachother, on her bed? Oops. My bad...not" lol! I loved it! See my commment was way more interesting!! After Hailey was released from the house of boredom, she decided to go see Nick. Since Hailey has become very close to every member of the Jonas family, she can now just let herself in the house. She talked to Joe for a few minutes then headed upstairs. Hailey opened the door and gasped. "What the hell Nick?!" Hailey screamed as she saw some brunette jump off of him. "Nicky! You told me she wasn't going to come over today!" The tramp said. She needed some acting lessons, fast. But Hailey was too angry to sense the fakeness in her voice. "What! No!" Nick said before turning his attention back to Hailey. "Listen! It's not what it looks like!" "Save it for someone who will believe you." Hailey said with tears forming in her eyes. She bolted out of the house. "Kelly what's you're problem?!" Nick yelled at her in anger. "She's not right for you baby." Kelly said while wrapping her arms around Nick's waist. He shoved them off. "No, you're not right for me." Nick yelled at her before chasing after Hailey. Hailey couldn't go home, Amanda would be there and ask what's wrong. She couldn't go to the Jonas's because she had just made a dramatic exit. So her only place left to run was the park. She thought she had made a clean getaway, but Nick saw her and yelled to her to stop. She kept running to the park, and then collapsed from exhaustion. She was fine, just tired. "Hailey, listen-" Nick started before being cut off. "No. You listen. I'm tired of having guys like you use me. Don't try to say that isn't true about you Nick. Just because I couldn't hang out with you for two days, you got some other girl to entertain you. I thought you changed. Obviously I was wrong." Hailey said in a mere whisper. "Hailey I'm-" She cut him off again. "Save it Nick. I'm through with the feeling of a broken heart... and I-I'm through with you..." She said with tears rolling down her cheeks. Nick wanted to wipe them away and say everything was going to be okay, but now that was gone. She stood up and walked away. Before she was out of Nick was she whispered one last word to him, "Goodbye." Comment, Rate, and Subscribe!

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